charamei: First, find out what your hero wants. Then just follow him. (NaNoWriMo: Follow The Hero)
charamei ([personal profile] charamei) wrote2011-04-11 08:09 pm
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Context is important, y'all

An interesting wording/character observation:

He's still going by the time Tagalong and Flabbaduckarusa have joined him under the indigo-violet swirls of the captive Vortex.


This was originally in a scene where the Doctor has POV. In that context, its connotations are all about freedom and Time Lords controlling things they perhaps shouldn't.

I just moved it into a scene where the Master has POV. Barely changed a word, yet it's suddenly all about power.

Words: not the only things that matter.

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