The writing process
May. 3rd, 2010 06:44 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
charameiA selection of notes from the original handwritten latest 1,000-ish words of First Steps:
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"I don't know,” Flabbaduckarusa says. “The author's lost the plot again."
"Oh." Snail frowns, trying to think. "Well, I suppose you need to communicate some key information to me, then we can go and look for Tagalong. Corridor scenes, donchaknow."
"OK then."
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[ARGH]
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Waaaaay too adult.
...
[Dead doll]
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Lots of decent stuff here, but it needs mixing up more: guilt WITH introspection, not after kthxbai
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WTF
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And that's it. The very last thing written in this notebook is 'WTF' in red ink.
So, you know.
This chapter, ugh. Hates it, precious, we does.
"I don't know,” Flabbaduckarusa says. “The author's lost the plot again."
"Oh." Snail frowns, trying to think. "Well, I suppose you need to communicate some key information to me, then we can go and look for Tagalong. Corridor scenes, donchaknow."
"OK then."
[ARGH]
Waaaaay too adult.
...
[Dead doll]
Lots of decent stuff here, but it needs mixing up more: guilt WITH introspection, not after kthxbai
WTF
And that's it. The very last thing written in this notebook is 'WTF' in red ink.
So, you know.
This chapter, ugh. Hates it, precious, we does.